Bobby V. - unless you are writing for a big band, your tuba range is kinda low
Back then - btone chords... lol. not bad, don't know if i would done a three part chord but not bad
Ice Cream man - sounds BCU influenced
Overall, ya got talent to start with. keep gettin better.
and don't change up the instruments (making horns sound like strings and stuff)... ive seen alot of arrangers do that, make their arrangement sound good, but when they put it back to horns it doesn't gel. not saying u do that, but if u ever were to, dont lol
Bobby V. - unless you are writing for a big band, your tuba range is kinda low
Back then - btone chords... lol. not bad, don't know if i would done a three part chord but not bad
Ice Cream man - sounds BCU influenced
Overall, ya got talent to start with. keep gettin better.
and don't change up the instruments (making horns sound like strings and stuff)... ive seen alot of arrangers do that, make their arrangement sound good, but when they put it back to horns it doesn't gel. not saying u do that, but if u ever were to, dont lol
I NEED FEEDBACK ON MY ARRANGEMENTS
Im a senior in H.S and Ive been arranging for about a month now...i need tips on how to make my music better so it can sell...thankyou
Clarity in your harmonic structure. I would work a little more clarifying wat chords are being played and where the weight of that sound should lie. Other then that, you ideas are strong. I would invest in some piano lessons if your not taking them already...always helps to improve one's overall-musicianship.
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Bobby V. - unless you are writing for a big band, your tuba range is kinda low
Back then - btone chords... lol. not bad, don't know if i would done a three part chord but not bad
Ice Cream man - sounds BCU influenced
Overall, ya got talent to start with. keep gettin better.
and don't change up the instruments (making horns sound like strings and stuff)... ive seen alot of arrangers do that, make their arrangement sound good, but when they put it back to horns it doesn't gel. not saying u do that, but if u ever were to, dont lol
thanx man
TBoneSuave said:
Clarity in your harmonic structure. I would work a little more clarifying wat chords are being played and where the weight of that sound should lie. Other then that, you ideas are strong. I would invest in some piano lessons if your not taking them already...always helps to improve one's overall-musicianship.