The tuba part note progressions on that breakdown should be different.its not flowing with what u were already started doing,and me.personality I dont write trombone parts within the bar lines.just does give u that sound.i seen u were playing with some dissonance that was nice.it was a good arrangement I would just rework the tubas and bones.
Wud crank harder n f...more comfortable power range overall den g. N if the btones got plenty love... den giv em mo! No real reason dere...i just love the sound of a powerful btone section...gives arrangement sum serious weight.
Ideas r solid. Conversation cud b clearer btween melody n other parts during bridge. U getn nicer. Always speaks volumes to hear an arranger orchestrate sumthn that hasnt beb already.
Bring down whole step, show da btones sum luv...chek the weight on sum of those chords n last note....instant classic. Cmn a long way...u startn to get yo own sound.
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Ideas r solid. Conversation cud b clearer btween melody n other parts during bridge. U getn nicer. Always speaks volumes to hear an arranger orchestrate sumthn that hasnt beb already.
Keep em cmn
Keep em cmn!